In the book, “Lolita,” Humbert Humbert describes his little nymphet with “lips as red as licked red candy.”
How gorgeous is that description? Can’t you just see the deep red and glossy sheen of a wet lollipop? The fact that he’s describing a 12 year old girl’s lips makes it all the more provocative and disturbing. Perhaps that’s why it works on so many levels. When I heard that line for the first time (I was listening to the audiobook) I stopped and rewound it four times just so that I could appreciate how utterly amazing Nabokov’s writing was. And then I set fire to my current manuscript in a fit of despair as I realized I would never come close to the level of descriptive mastery that writers like Nabokov showed. Continue reading “Color Tools for the Writer”→
My main character, Roland, goes through quite a transformation over the course of my novel. He cleans himself up, stops acting like a dick, and quits smoking… all for a girl. He also loses a bit of weight and starts exercising. This is a painful process for Roland. He’s never exercised a day in his life.
As the author, I owe it to Roland and the readers to paint a picture of Roland’s roller coaster ride of ups and downs as he goes through this transformation. Part of me can use my imagination. I watched my dad quit smoking so I can draw from that, but I’ve never successfully quit a bad habit myself. I think it’s time to put myself to the test, all in the spirit of getting inside my character’s head.
I wrote out a long, sentimental post about Space Shuttle and how sad it was to see it grounded after so many decades of service, but WordPress lost all of my work and now I don’t have time to re-write it. Dammit.
Long post short: Welcome to Virginia, Shuttle. It won’t be like flying, but you will be surrounded by a team of caretakers, nostalgic grown-ups, and happy children for the rest of your days.
I am a very visual person and love using pictures as story prompts, like the StoryWorld card in my photo. So where can a person go for truly stunning photo prompts? Continue reading “For the Visual Writer”→